Dear Charlene,
I really liked your story, it is perfect for Halloween!!! My favorite part was when everyone was around the campsite. I hope you make more books I would read every one!!! How did you remember that big long name? I really like how it’s a story from your childhood and how you remembered it all. I love to read and write, someday I want to be an author just like you!!!
Stef
Stefanie – Grade 5